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Airborn by *silla-chan:iconsilla-chan:


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Submitted: Nov 27, 2007
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Here's another Doodle! :O

Still a lot to work on! Still a lot to work on! But hey! Doodles is supposed to help. :XD: So I hope I can soon draw a real picture of a bird! :aww:

Only B and 8B pencils used here! :D + photoshop to make it darker, like is should be!

P.S: Imb! sjå hær! Hå;pe virkeli du læs herre. ^^; Kan ta littegranne ti me derre menneske æ skull tægn t dæ, men æ jobbe me saken. ;)

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=Valita-the-hedgehog:iconValita-the-hedgehog: Nov 27, 2007, 9:02:15 AM
Hey that's very nice, I like how you did shades on feathers on head and wings. Great! <3

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*imberantiel:iconimberantiel: Nov 27, 2007, 10:24:35 AM
aww what a nice birdie! :love: it's good to have you back silla :aww:

lang tid :O_o: men, m,en æ har jo venta så læng allrede >.<

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*silla-chan:iconsilla-chan: Nov 27, 2007, 11:13:09 AM
Thank you Valita!
It's cool to hear that you like it! :excited: :hug:

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*silla-chan:iconsilla-chan: Nov 27, 2007, 11:14:18 AM
BIRDIE! :XD: It's good to be back, Imb! :aww:

Jobber med saken! :O må prøv å få jort færdi no tægninga æ har jobba me læng no! :faint:

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~Haine-Rammsteiner:iconHaine-Rammsteiner: Nov 27, 2007, 11:55:07 AM
You really have patience to work on your illustrations, uh? ^_^
The tin feathers looks so softs. Like blowing on the wind.

Loved it, lovey! :love:

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*silla-chan:iconsilla-chan: Nov 27, 2007, 12:31:02 PM
I only used 3 hours on this one. ^^; And yeah. I sat with my nose 1 mm from the paper for the 3 last hours of school. :XD: But I finished it! ;) *proud* It's a new personal record!
*stares at beak* OH, I love the beak! It's so cute!
I will be working more on wings! They NEED improvement.

And thanks for the comment, angel! X3 You're the best! =3 If you got more advice about what to do different to improve I'll gladly listen! =3

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*silla-chan:iconsilla-chan: Nov 27, 2007, 12:31:30 PM
and and! Got anything to say about how I can improve, imb? :O

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*silla-chan:iconsilla-chan: Nov 27, 2007, 12:32:26 PM
Valita? :aww:
SOrry for asking, buuuut.. Do you got any constructive critique for me? :O ^^;

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=Valita-the-hedgehog:iconValita-the-hedgehog: Nov 27, 2007, 12:43:51 PM
Sure, I can try! XD
Well... *thinks really hard* if you're drawing feathers, you don't have to do them all the same - go ahead and experiment! Birds usually have fathers at the end of wing longers than other. I don't know how to say it, but I hope you can undearstand. XD
Hmhmhmhm. Head is really good, I can't see anything bad here.
Mm, tail. It looks... *searching da right word* ow, I hope this one is right: stiff/stiffy? XD You can always make it bigger, more... wide. I hope it's right word too. XD
I think anatomy is all right, even if somethings messed up I can't see it.
And your shading is very good, theres no any special advice, you must just practise and it'll be better and better. :aww:
I think that's all. I hope you can understand what I wanted to say. I really like this picture! I can always give some constructive critism, some people just don't like it and I prefer to be more careful. :XD:

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*silla-chan:iconsilla-chan: Nov 27, 2007, 1:15:10 PM
I just have to say thank you! :aww: Constructive criticism is good sometimes!
I didn't try to hard on the wings and tail, but you helped me to change the errors into words! :D

Hopefully, I'll get it right soon. :aww:
Thanks again! ^_^ :hug:

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Don't give a girl a promise.. ..If you know you can't keep it. ~Cortana (Halo3)