Hey that's very nice, I like how you did shades on feathers on head and wings. Great! <3
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98% of DA users draw arts because they want to be popular. If you're one of 2% who draw because of your own pleasure, copy it and paste to your signature. --- Sorry for my english
I only used 3 hours on this one. And yeah. I sat with my nose 1 mm from the paper for the 3 last hours of school. But I finished it! *proud* It's a new personal record!
*stares at beak* OH, I love the beak! It's so cute!
I will be working more on wings! They NEED improvement.
And thanks for the comment, angel! X3 You're the best! =3 If you got more advice about what to do different to improve I'll gladly listen! =3
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Don't give a girl a promise.. ..If you know you can't keep it. ~Cortana (Halo3)
Sure, I can try! XD
Well... *thinks really hard* if you're drawing feathers, you don't have to do them all the same - go ahead and experiment! Birds usually have fathers at the end of wing longers than other. I don't know how to say it, but I hope you can undearstand. XD
Hmhmhmhm. Head is really good, I can't see anything bad here.
Mm, tail. It looks... *searching da right word* ow, I hope this one is right: stiff/stiffy? XD You can always make it bigger, more... wide. I hope it's right word too. XD
I think anatomy is all right, even if somethings messed up I can't see it.
And your shading is very good, theres no any special advice, you must just practise and it'll be better and better.
I think that's all. I hope you can understand what I wanted to say. I really like this picture! I can always give some constructive critism, some people just don't like it and I prefer to be more careful.
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98% of DA users draw arts because they want to be popular. If you're one of 2% who draw because of your own pleasure, copy it and paste to your signature. --- Sorry for my english
I just have to say thank you! Constructive criticism is good sometimes!
I didn't try to hard on the wings and tail, but you helped me to change the errors into words!
Hopefully, I'll get it right soon.
Thanks again! ^_^
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Don't give a girl a promise.. ..If you know you can't keep it. ~Cortana (Halo3)
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98% of DA users draw arts because they want to be popular. If you're one of 2% who draw because of your own pleasure, copy it and paste to your signature.
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Sorry for my english
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"hey guys, can i have a flashback about what happened 16 seconds ago?"
-Naruto the abridged series
It's cool to hear that you like it!
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Don't give a girl a promise.. ..If you know you can't keep it. ~Cortana (Halo3)
Jobber med saken!
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Don't give a girl a promise.. ..If you know you can't keep it. ~Cortana (Halo3)
The tin feathers looks so softs. Like blowing on the wind.
Loved it, lovey!
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Sanity's a limitation.
*stares at beak* OH, I love the beak! It's so cute!
I will be working more on wings! They NEED improvement.
And thanks for the comment, angel! X3 You're the best! =3 If you got more advice about what to do different to improve I'll gladly listen! =3
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Don't give a girl a promise.. ..If you know you can't keep it. ~Cortana (Halo3)
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Don't give a girl a promise.. ..If you know you can't keep it. ~Cortana (Halo3)
SOrry for asking, buuuut.. Do you got any constructive critique for me?
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Don't give a girl a promise.. ..If you know you can't keep it. ~Cortana (Halo3)
Well... *thinks really hard* if you're drawing feathers, you don't have to do them all the same - go ahead and experiment! Birds usually have fathers at the end of wing longers than other. I don't know how to say it, but I hope you can undearstand. XD
Hmhmhmhm. Head is really good, I can't see anything bad here.
Mm, tail. It looks... *searching da right word* ow, I hope this one is right: stiff/stiffy? XD You can always make it bigger, more... wide. I hope it's right word too. XD
I think anatomy is all right, even if somethings messed up I can't see it.
And your shading is very good, theres no any special advice, you must just practise and it'll be better and better.
I think that's all. I hope you can understand what I wanted to say. I really like this picture! I can always give some constructive critism, some people just don't like it and I prefer to be more careful.
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98% of DA users draw arts because they want to be popular. If you're one of 2% who draw because of your own pleasure, copy it and paste to your signature.
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Sorry for my english
I didn't try to hard on the wings and tail, but you helped me to change the errors into words!
Hopefully, I'll get it right soon.
Thanks again! ^_^
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Don't give a girl a promise.. ..If you know you can't keep it. ~Cortana (Halo3)
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